[boo]

Please… anyone? Thank you in advance…

shaayaraanaa see hai, jindagee kee fajaa
aap bhee jindagee kaa majaa lijiye
mai gajal ban gayee aap ke saamane
shauk se ab muze gunagunaa lijiye

aap sun to rahe hai, mere dil kee lay
is mein benaam see yek udaasee bhee hain
is udaasee mein nagmaa koee chhed kar
yek bechain dil kee duwaan lijiye

aap ke pyaar kaa jo bhee mewaar hain
isase kab jaana-ye-jaa muz ko inkaar hain
jis tarah aap chaahe, najar aaoo main
muz ko har rang mein aajamaa lijeeye

[madhurdixit]

shaayaraanaa see hai, jindagee kee fajaa

Like a poem, is the ambience of life
aap bhee jindagee kaa majaa lijiye

Even you, take the fun from living
mai gajal ban gayee aap ke saamane

I have become a ghazal (song) in front of you
shauk se ab muze gunagunaa lijiye

Willingly let me sing

aap sun to rahe hai, mere dil kee lay

You are listening to the hearts sigh
is mein benaam see yeh udaasee bhee hain

It is dishonoured and there is sorrow in it
is udaasee mein nagmaa koee chhed kar

Tease a melody into this sorrow
yeh bechain dil kee duwaan lijiye

Take the blessings of this impatient heart

aap ke pyaar kaa jo bhee mewaar hain

Whoever is a royal in your love
isase kab jaana-ye-jaa muz ko inkaar hain

To him, the love of my life, when would I decline
jis tarah aap chaahe, najar aaoo main

However you like, I will come in your sight
muz ko har rang mein aajamaa lijeeye

Test me in every colour

[madhurdixit]

PS – I LOVE your image Boo!

[minniemonalisa]

good translation, but i can see some errors proably due to the original phonetic translation:

shaayaraanaa see hai, jindagee kee fajaa

Like a poem, is the ambience of life (POETRY IS THE PLEASURE OF LIFE) I THINK 'LIFE' IS PERSONIFIED IN THIS SENSE IE LIFE IS TAKING PLEASURE FROM POETRY
aap bhee jindagee kaa majaa lijiye (ZINDAGEE)

Even you, take the fun from living (YOU TOO SHOULD TAKE ENJOYENT FROM LIFE)
mai gajal ban gayee aap ke saamane

I have become a ghazal (song) in front of you
shauk se ab muze gunagunaa lijiye

Willingly let me sing (LET ME SING WITH WITH JOY/PLEASURE)

aap sun to rahe hai, mere dil kee lay

You are listening to the hearts sigh
is mein benaam see yeh udaasee bhee hain

It is dishonoured and there is sorrow in it YOU ARE CONFUSIND BADNAAM (DISHONHONOURED) WITH BENAAM (UNNAMED) LINE TRANSLATES AS: THERE IS ALSO A UNAMED SORROW IN IT —- NOTHING TO DO WITH HONOUR !!!
is udaasee mein nagmaa koee chhed kar

Tease a melody into this sorrow
yeh bechain dil kee duwaan lijiye

Take the blessings of this impatient heart (TAKE THE BLESSINGS OF THIS RESTLESS HEART) NOTHING TO DO WITH PATIENCE

aap ke pyaar kaa jo bhee mewaar hain

Whoever is a royal in your love
isase kab jaana-ye-jaa muz ko inkaar hain

To him, the love of my life, when would I decline (WHEN HAVE I REFUSED IT? …. LOVE OF MY LIFE)
jis tarah aap chaahe, najar aaoo main

Ho

[minniemonalisa]

shauk se ab muze gunagunaa lijiye

Willingly let me sing (LET ME SING WITH JOY/PLEASURE)

is mein benaam see yeh udaasee bhee hain –

is mein benaam see EK udaasee bhee hain

(THERE IS ALSO A UNNAMED SORROW IN IT)

BENAAM = UNNAMED

BADNAAM = DISHONOURED

yeh bechain dil kee duwaan lijiye

Take the blessings of this RESTLESS heart

[Author]

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